You say

by cicek   Jan 25, 2008


You say life can betray us, but all i know now is that i love you and i feel we can make it through.
If we do make it theres no one else id rather be with than you, and be married to.
like i have said before, your the beat within my heart and without you the beat would be gone and i wouldnt be able to go on without you. i love you

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  • 16 years ago

    by mandy

    That was really good, i like it a lot, (maybe try and put it in a diffrent format), but other then that, i really do think it was awsome, keep on wrting, you are a good poet!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Maybe he is running from you? could it be?

    well, you know better than me.

    i would say that i enjoyed reading really but i will say to put it in more ryming way will make it much better....

    anyway this is MY OPINION nothing more

    as long as feelings are true you can write whatever you want and i mean it hehe

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