I am yours and u are mine

Alright, again like the previous comment I left, the structure needs work, it's like you're writting a paragraph, making it into stanzas would be a help.

For example take,

"I am your girl and you are my man together in this world we will stand hand in hand.

we will make through the bad and the good and no matter what we may go through baby i promice i will always stay true."

and change it to this:

I am your girl,
And you're my man.
Together in this world
We'll stand hand in hand.

We'll make it through
The bad and the good.
And we'll love one another,
Just like we've always had.

And no matter what
We may go through,
Baby I promise
I'll always stay true.

So there you have it, I little bit of work and this can turn from just ok, to outstandingly written.

Again I must state, I do like the way you worded it, it has good flow, and can be excellent with a few additions like I stated above.

Peace, Joe

Nice poem

I think this has to much wording describing one thing, but i really enjoyed it.
Bryce

Thats such a sweeet poem! keeep it uup! :D :D

I agree with all the coments...you are so very lucky....most of us never find that...be happy....I love this poem....xoxoxo