Rose

The repetition in this poem is effective and links the stanzas together really well, when I read the first line I was wondering why this wasn't in the "love" section but then when I got to the second stanza I realised. The structure is really strict and it keeps the poem well-together.

Nice one,

Em xXx

I've read this poem before, but again, I would love to point out the fact that it's just so amazing. The emotion is very great! Good job!

.:CiNdY:.

Excellent poem. very well described and you seem to know what your talking about. very well compared too. keep writing.

I like the symbolisms you've used in this poem. You have some minor errors in this poem though.

(Its) hardships
(Its) struggles
(Its) problems
(Its) bloodshed
(Its) suffering
(Its) sorrows
(Its) regrets
(Its) successes
= It's

Anyway like I said earlier... It was a great poem. I like the topic in this piece, well done. I think it flowed nicely, keep up the good work :)

Wow...
I have to admire this deep, beautiful yet somehow very sad piece. I like it from the first to the last line, it is very captivating and it left truly powerful impression on me. Your comparisons are amazing, very unique.
Breathtaking piece, one of the best poems about life I've read in a while.
Excellently done!