Dead to you

This is a sad one. But I still liked it. Another 5/5 =D

Another amazing poem! I am highly impressed with your work. It is very detailed and you have an excellent description too. Very vivid in everything. I must say that the fourth stanza was definitely my favorite. [:

Very well written.... amazing... keep writing!

I enjoyed reading this very very much. It was very emotional. The flow of off just a little tiny it, but the rhymes were superb. Everything rhymed just perfect. :]

To walk on glass with bleeding feet
To cross the skies with broken wings
To swim an infinite ocean of flames
This is living, all those painful things
^^Favorite stanza! :]

Please leave me alone, and let me fall
^^Loved that line too.

Cayce xx

You know, love is so painful. Seems like every time you get in a relationship, it ends in a way you did not expect it to end, or at least not the way you wanted it to. Love, a dangerous, dangerous, and weary road. I say this so many times, and I will say it again. There is no cure for heartbreak. I really wish there was though.

You know, this poem reminded me of my past relationships. Where, I really thought that "they" were the once. Where, I really thought like a fool "This is it, this is the real thing". To find out by the end that is was just some... teenage adolescent infatuation you know?

I mean, what do you do about it? I remember how I felt. Just like your poem. I felt the dwelling darkness of my abysmal emotions get the best of me. I felt like the swimming oceans, infinite oceans of fire. That was my life, my world.

You captured my eyes, my imagination, my past memories. You called out to me in this poem. You really did, and the best part? Is that I sensed all that emotions that was once thought forgotten, remembered.

It all came back to me, whether that is a good thing, or not. You actually did it, and that left me very impressed. I really did feel the poem. I really did.

_[Deathly'Amore]