by Beautiful Forever Feb 2, 2008
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
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I close my eyes, and its quiet, |
by PygmyPuff
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Its alright. Some of the stanza are amazing with great flow and rhythm, but others are a bit cliche, like the second line. its like, hmmmm, but not in an in depth kind of way |
by Nix
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Good poem, fourth stanza threw me off cause I don't like a tone that you created in it but I enjoyed in this one more than in your other poem. |
by she
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Buetufuly written,luved the last stanza! |
by Blissful
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Wow I loved this! The final stanza was perfect in every way and it was a wonderful way to end your poem. It left the reader wanting more. I could relate with everything you described which is why I truly enjoyed this piece. |
by Bekka Smekka
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Great poem!! your awsome!!! |