Can't comprehend

by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost   Feb 3, 2008


I miss you so much
I can't even sleep
The note you left me with
Is the only thing I have left to keep

I keep reading it
Over and over again
And yet still theres not a word
That I can comprehend

Except when you signed
I love you always
I feel like im walking through
A mile long hallway

All the doors are locked
But I can still hear your voice
On the other side of every door
I keep on walking but not by choice

I just see your face
At the door at the end of the hall
I keep screaming your name
But you can't hear my call

But you stare at me
You won't even blink
As I get closer
My heart begins to sink

Your eyes are white
Your chest isn't moving at all
Your dead and I can't do a thing
No one can hear my broken hearted call

I wake up
Must have dosed off reading your note
I'm crying because seeing you like that
I... I just can't cope

Someone please tell me
What these dreams mean again
Because now theirs not a single part of it
That I can comprehend

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  • 16 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    I liked the general storyline of this poem. You have some good word use. The last line fit perfectly. One issue, though, that i've noticed is it doesn't flow well. such as in the first stanza. The last 2 lines have too many syllables/words to fit or work well with the first 2.