Indescribable

I like when it comes Straight Outta Your Heart! That's a beautiful piece, Letty!

I love it!!!!! Well said and I dig the word choice you have chosen to write this poem. Keep up the good work. I like how you said my charade has been seen through. That was awesome.

I personally don't like ending too much but this poem is still incredible.
You described your self on truly remarkable, original way. I love every line, very mesmerizing piece, it kept mt attention.
Sorrowful write, few lines are truly amazing. Overall great job, you created truly intense tone in each stanza.

I really like the end when you profess that no matter the current loneliness and bleak out look toward the future you will still stay true to yourself and not scum to blasphemy. And while I suppose that atleast some level of sadness is at the heart of every expressive writer, this particular write still leaves me wondering how someone so gifted and true even in the face of despair can sound so helpless? I'm a fool at best, but to this fool it seems like you are your own saving grace Letty!

Richard

The poem is great in terms of how it's written. And it's also great in terms of you letting your emotions out in it. I'm simply thinking of you after reading it.