Self Esteem

by MeltInHisArms   Feb 6, 2008


Fire burning cold; laughter turned to screams...
lonesome in a croud; lowest of low self esteems.
Heads staring down; tears choked back...
bleeding hearts; curage that's always been lacked.
Withering flowers in the dept of night...
beautiful souls refusing to see the light.

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  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    I know so many people who are beautiful souls refusing the light..(i quoted that wrong, but u no what i mean!!!) and it is too bad. if i cud, i'd give u a 15/10!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Niinaa

    I love this poem it has so much emotion , the wordswere very powerful , Great Job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    It's Strong And True. Hope You Continue to Write I Love Your poetry (Hence Why I've Favorited You >.> ) xD
    I Love it though, honestly.
    Keep writing

    With Love,
    -Ally

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    Strong poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Talieka

    I love this poem.. im glad u submitted more poems bcoz as u know i love them...
    ur poems are truely amazing.. keep the brilliant work up.. 5/5 (as always) =]

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