Want A Long, Good Comment?

So I don't feel completely selfish for asking for comments on my poems, which I requested in another topic, I am offering to give out at least one comment to anyone that responds to this forum.

The comment will actually be good--not a oneliner...shiver--and I'll vote too.

So post your name, and I'll start the work.

If you could comment and rate my newest that would be great.
Thanks a lot.

either my newest poem or the one right before it would be great =) thank you very very much.

Could you read "apart of me" :)
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I've commented on your poem "Addressed To You, The Rich Man," so if you would like to return the favour please do so on any poem. Thanks.

i'd appreciate it if you would comment on any of my poems...it shouldn't be all that hard to choose one since I only have two...Thanks much

Hi, if you can kindly comment on 'The life of a girl' thanks a million. I'll return the favor. =)

I would very much appreciate a critique of "a little piece of nothing, really". Thank you!

could you do broken or one of my latest? thanks in advance...i'll return the favor.
**lisa**

Any of my poems would work..... thanks I'll return the favor!

could u pick one of mine to read if you have time... i'll read one of yours as well, thank you

please read halo of black roses!! thank you!!

*erica*

Could you read Best Friends? Thanks

kool this is really kind of you i hate getting one liners. my poems take forever to write and they are stright from my soul so i mean why read them if your not going to vote and make a decent comment. it only takes a few minutes....it takes longer to actually read the poem.

you can read any of mine it really doent matter

That's very nice of you =0) Please comment on:

Today
Answer this please
Catch my fall

Thank you so much in advance...

Please comment on any of my poems...I'm not picky.
Thanks in advance

please r/c Heaven and Hell your poem was excellent

Will do :)
And if you could r/r/c one of mine, any one of mine, that'd be greatly appreciated aswell. Thanks muchly :)

Omg pretty please!!! Uhh please read *The Garden...* and/or *Sinking Heart...* it would be greatly Appreciated! =D thank u so much!!!

Wow, I'm not going to act like a comment will save my life.
Comment on any of my poems,
And I'll do the same for you.

Heyy, I am new here and I was wondering if you could comment my first poem, and I will comment yours...

PS The poem isn't the first copy, because I started tot ype it and it got lost...I tried to make it as good as the original((it didn't work)), but I think it may still be good =\.