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  • Italian Stallion
    18 years ago

    Can you please do,

    Loving You (Part 1)
    Loving You (Part 2)
    Loving You (Part 3)

    Thank you, Joe

  • N J Thornton
    18 years ago

    Ooh happy "one month."

    Any of my most recent would be great.
    Thanks!!

  • Bloomed Rose
    18 years ago

    Hey, so your pretty new to this site? well could you r/r/c these poems?:

    My newest one: I hope I'll still have you
    Romances Sweet Medody

    On the third one (which you don't have to do) you can pick any that you'd like.

  • Brittney Follett
    18 years ago

    Ey. Do n e thin ya haven't done yet.

    Thanks Babe

  • Sandra D
    18 years ago

    any of my new ones would be nice, but it doesn't HAVE to be new... i guess u could do any that u haven't done... if it's not too much trouble...

    Thanx!!!!!

  • Kristina
    18 years ago

    any of my new ones please.
    i'll return the favor.
    thanks.

  • Mousie
    18 years ago

    Dream We Reunite
    Imagination
    How Did He Find Her?

    thanks so much!

  • Sarah Ann
    18 years ago

    Wow, please read:

    A Canvas Of Words,
    and any other you'd like.

    Thank you!

  • ShootingStar179
    18 years ago

    Never a Careless Girl.
    Roses
    Never Will We Be Together

  • kiesha
    18 years ago

    That sounds good to me. Check out any of mine that sound good to you. Thanks a million!

  • LadyWaszky
    18 years ago

    Hey if you would please read my latest Blood's Sweet Toxicity.

    And if you want to do others thank you!

    but BST- is a poem very unlike any i have written. and so i want feedback on it. .. especially since it has such a not high, rating, i want to know why. =]

  • e LIZ a beth
    18 years ago

    hey :D i like people in good moods!!! :D lol

    and yeah this site is pretty damn awesome its like an addiction. but a good one :D.

    anywhoooooo.
    uhm..

    could you please rrc
    porcelian tears
    underneath her skin
    and, i'd do anything for you

  • BrokenREALiTy
    18 years ago

    OH .
    Could you please do :

    `Love is .
    `Once .
    `Past Yesterday .

    Thank you [:
    ..__MiNDYY

  • Dacey Flame
    18 years ago

    I think thats 15 so far..

    So, could you please do

    ^Falling Short
    ^My Better Half
    ^You never knew (A suicide Note)

    Please and thanks =)

  • omen
    18 years ago

    hey man i thank you for doing this but i'm going to r/r/c one of your poems just because, so could you do To HIM, Broken Angles, and Please Kill Me Slowly? thanks
    omen

  • Cella Bella
    18 years ago

    Hey! this is super nice of you to do this. So I will have to return the favor. :]

    This Love
    Lost In Reverie
    My Dreams

    oxo

    Marcella

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    18 years ago

    If you aren't busy, please do which ever three you please. Thanks.

  • Brittney Follett
    18 years ago

    Thanks so much! No that last one wasn't play .. ger.. ized. .. whatever.. I know theres a poem out there its also called warped and twisted but it goes like this:

    Harsh words & violent blows
    Hidden secrets nobody knows
    Eyes are open, hands are fisted
    Deep inside I'm warped & twisted
    So many tricks & so many lies
    Too many whens & too many whys
    Nobody's special, nobody's gifted
    I'm just me, warped & twisted
    Sleeping awake & choking on a dream
    Listening loudly to a silent scream
    Call my mind, the number's unlisted
    Lost in someone so warped & twisted
    On my knees, alive but dead
    Look at the invisible blood I've bled
    I'm not gone, my mind has drifted
    Don't expect much, I'm warped & twisted
    Burnt out, wasted, empty, & hollow
    Today's just yesterday's tomorrow
    The sun died out, the ashes sifted
    I'm still here, warped & twisted

    A lot of people play.. ger.. ize .. that. I got my idea from it.. but its not playgerized.. Frick.. I got to figure out to to spell that.

    Thanks for the comment babe!