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ill r/r/c as many poems as you want me to for the first 15 people just leave the poems u want me to read and i will thanks

*i cant read explicit or slang poems

thanks

Could you do You Killed Me But I Still Love You
Thank you.
xx

done it was very good i loved it

any more takers

Could you please do:

All I've Held On To

When One Heart Becomes Two

Persuading Act

Thanks.

please do

radio talk
static radio
mistletoe

thanks!

ok bribri im done with urs i commented on 2 of them for your post but you dont have to do my poems since you put them in here too if you dont want to, they were great poems

Okay. Lol. Yeah, I just saw your other post. I'll just do yours. Cos you didn't know they were here , too.

I'll get to them in a minute.

Thanks, though

k jennie im done with yours they were wonderful i added you to my favorites i think im going to comment on a few more i saw that i want to read great job

aww.. thats a really sweet offer.. ill read one of yours anyways

can you read
- away from you

can u please comment:

*she begged him not to leave
*silent cries and invisible tears

thanx.=]

k becca i did urs

My Featured poems please.

alright kristen im done with urs

im done with urs michelle

ok theworldfell&uwerentthere im finished with urs

can u do
one day and
i want you to see. plz thankz!

ok britt im done with urs

ok antonia im done with urs

My Valentine
The Bottle
Dream We Reunite
Imagination

thanks so much!!!! you're great!!! let me know if you want me to do any of yours, i'd be happy to return the favor... if i get a chance i'll go on and check it out, but just let me know if you want me to do some of yours.

.. why do you have two? .. n e ways this is what I said:

Trapped in Time

Into My Head

Footprints

Chaotic Mind

.. If you have the time :) thanks Babe

ok thanks guys for responding i will get to ur poems tomorrow

if its not to late
can you please do
"Revenge"
&
"Realization"
thankyou

If you have time could you please do:
"The Birth"
"Paradox Lady"
"Pretty Death"
or
"All the Ways You Love Me"

Thanks!

brittney, i did urs on the other post but they're done

ok mousie im done with urs

ok my love for u is endless, i did ur poems but for some reason it wouldnt let me see ur revenge poem and im not sure why so in replacement of that poem i did s.u.i.c.i.d.e. of the heart

ok the queen of spades, i went to ur poems but the only one of the four that u wanted me to read that i could see was pretty the others werent there so i did clown, pretty d.e.a.t.h., s.u.i.c.i.d.e cry, and the black rose instead

ok rachael ann i finished ur poem, i had previously commented on my hero a soldier, i think its the second comment so i didnt comment again

thanks so much!

Please r/r/c any that catches your eyes.

Thanks!

J. Lau

Please comment on:

I want to kill her
letter to God
No more....

Thank you so much in advance =0)