Submission date : 2006-03-21
Last edit : 2006-03-21
Simon Hayes ( F C D )
... woah... this one gives me chills!! A dark and haunting write!! Superbly done.
Melissa ( F P C D )
Wow, what a haunting and chilling write! Definately scared me, I'm glad it's morning! ;o)
Luke ( F P C D )
Great Rhymes.. With a Great Flow.. Filled With Sinister Meanings.. All In All A Great Poem!
shobhana kumar ( F C D )
Great one. really must keep this in mind before we hit the sack each night!!!
That one was really scary but also really good at the same time. Keep up all the good work!