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by Steven Beesley Jul 17, 2012
Nature, environment /
Gentle lapping of the waves on the rocks,
the sun begins to peek out.
So begins a new day.17th July, 2012 (c)Kimo:
A post-Haiku poetic form , consisting of three lines of 10, 7, and 6 syllables. This form of poetry was invented in Israel.
by Ingrid de Klerck
Wow Steven!!! You know so many formats, you are a real poetry lover!
I loved the tranquil mood in which this little poem left me. Such peace can be found in simple scenes like you just painted it.
Really well done, my friend,
I love this post haiku, the description and the imaginary of starting a new day while the waves touches the rocks is beautiful.
by Meena Krish
Such a lovely picture this Haiku has formed in my mind! An interesting form and you have used it perfectly to describe the start of a day..excellent!
by Maple Tree
This is beautiful... New day... new sunrise... makes me vision a purplish orange sun, while sipping coffee.... love this form... very pretty piece!