I love you (sonnet)

by Fsams   Jul 2, 2008


You are the only angel who I find
When I'm alone, you're in my mind

I can feel you deep in my heart
Never felt we are far apart

I can smell your scent with the breeze
Keeps me and my soul at ease

When the night falls, moon comes out
Reveals your beauty, there's no doubt

I wish if I was the lucky breeze
The breeze that touches your cheeks

I would embrace you with love and grace
Slowly and softly kiss your face

I would whisper the words so true
O my darling I love you

Fsams
30/06/2008
20:59 pm
Sunday

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  • 9 years ago

    by Annaam

    Woww....
    This is really sweet and quite well-written! :)

    5/5. 8)

  • 9 years ago

    by StefQ

    First of all very nice and cute poem, the words match and everything flows great. But in this line :
    "I wish if I was the lucky breeze
    The breeze that touches your cheeks"
    I think the "If" should be "that". Other then this good sonnet, loved it ! Especially the end!

  • 9 years ago

    by Hebe

    What a beautiful poem!
    The rhyming is perfect, like your word choice. Very romantic of course.
    This one touched me deep. Haven't read a love poem for a while.. you did a very good job here!
    Take care

    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    What a sweet poem!!..This is so romantic and nice...It's beautifully written and the rhyme rocked..
    Good job,keep it up5/5...

  • 9 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    Beautifully written. Although I'm not a pro on the structure of sonnets it looked good enough to me. I love this poem, it made me tear up a bit. Whoever you've written this about is a lucky person. 5/5