First of all very nice and cute poem, the words match and everything flows great. But in this line :
"I wish if I was the lucky breeze
The breeze that touches your cheeks"
I think the "If" should be "that". Other then this good sonnet, loved it ! Especially the end!
Beautifully written. Although I'm not a pro on the structure of sonnets it looked good enough to me. I love this poem, it made me tear up a bit. Whoever you've written this about is a lucky person. 5/5