Oh my angel (Shape)

Really nice. It was simple and straight to the point. I like the structure of your poem (and I checked out the shape as well.. =) clever). I liked how it got shorter as the poem approached the end. It's as if it was fading to an end. Just one thing though, I don't think you needed to make it rhyme. I think it would've been even stronger without some of the rhymes. Nice work.

Awee....very cute, very nice idea adding the shap into it and it was wonderful to read---much luck---tara

Wow.. awesome, I put it in Word, it's an angel! ..(unnecessary thing to say, you know it yourself, but I was really surprised)
That's beautiful done, very unique, never saw that before.
Sweet words,
End was great
Loved reading it
Take care

Beautiful piece filled with wonderful emotion. It all flowed just flawlessly and overall it was a joy to read. Well done *5/5*

This is a great write and the shape made it even better. What i think is that you should space the poem here so readers will see the shape already without copy/paste. Still, overall a wonderful job. 5/5