Oh my angel (Shape)

by Fsams   Sep 4, 2007


Love
Is for sure
Within my heart
And the love only
Belongs to you
My darling
Words can never tell you how much I love you
But believe me my darling, my words for you are true
I wish I could show you my heart
To show you there is a part
That craves for your care
And feels to share

Oh my angel
Hold me now
Don't ask me how
Just get into my arms
Let me feel you with my palms
Feel free
Believe me
I am true
I love you

Written by Fsams
31/08/2007
Friday 2:45

Copy and paste this poem into Microsoft Word and Press Ctrl+A and then Ctrl+E, See the Shape!

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  • 9 years ago

    by khobo

    Really nice. It was simple and straight to the point. I like the structure of your poem (and I checked out the shape as well.. =) clever). I liked how it got shorter as the poem approached the end. It's as if it was fading to an end. Just one thing though, I don't think you needed to make it rhyme. I think it would've been even stronger without some of the rhymes. Nice work.

  • 9 years ago

    by Tara

    Awee....very cute, very nice idea adding the shap into it and it was wonderful to read---much luck---tara

  • 9 years ago

    by Hebe

    Wow.. awesome, I put it in Word, it's an angel! ..(unnecessary thing to say, you know it yourself, but I was really surprised)
    That's beautiful done, very unique, never saw that before.
    Sweet words,
    End was great
    Loved reading it
    Take care

  • 9 years ago

    by Blissful

    Beautiful piece filled with wonderful emotion. It all flowed just flawlessly and overall it was a joy to read. Well done *5/5*

  • 9 years ago

    by Sweet Fragility

    This is a great write and the shape made it even better. What i think is that you should space the poem here so readers will see the shape already without copy/paste. Still, overall a wonderful job. 5/5