Don't fear I am here

by waiting 4 some1   Jul 5, 2008


Dear my best friend I have a message for you
Just one thing you need to know and one thing to do
You need to know that you are not alone
So achieve your dreams, don't fear the unknown

If you are tired to walk I will be your legs
If you need to fly I can be your wings
I will be your candle to show you the way
For you I will melt and die to shine your days

So step forward and don't be afraid
Together we will face what lies ahead
Aim for the top I will watch your steps
No one will be able to sink our ship
From harm and pain I will be your guard
I will protect you till death, I will fight so hard

If it's "Why" you ask I am ready to sacrifice my soul
And "Why" your happiness is one of my ultimate goals
It's just because you are simply the best
I will never lose you for any life's test

If it's "Why" you ask I am ready to sacrifice my soul
And "Why" your happiness is one of ultimate my goals
It's just I don't want to lose you since I have lost some1 before
So if someone tried to take you from me I will fight back and roar

Your friendship was something I fought so hard to acquire
Now I am your best too; I have seized the whole empire

From the seed to the roots up to a growing tree
Our friendship is pure and true anyone can see

I don't know how far I can go and how more I can give
But I will be your faithful and loyal friend as long as I live

this poem is dedicated to my best friend who's having a bad time now...

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  • 9 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Wow! 23 I's and forced rhyming throughout the piece....A nice dedication to your friend but as far as rhythm, flow and creativity, I have to say there wasn't any. Maybe try to rewrite it without forcing all the rhymes and remove all those unnecessary filler words.

  • 9 years ago

    by Prasad Ramesh Baadkar

    What a poem... Wish I had one ... just single friend who had such a wonderful thought as your poem..

    But true friends are hard to find....

    Anyway That was a wonderful poem...

    Thanks for sharing it with us...

    Keep it up..

    Best wishes... Karan

  • 9 years ago

    by The Queen

    As always your poems never failed to touched my heart deeply..A loving and sincere piece dedicated to your bestfriend..Excellent piece..

  • 9 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Wow that is so far one of my favorite poems. I wish I had a friend who was that true and loving. You have a lot of talent. I love "I will be your candle to show you the way for you I will melt and die to shine your days". It is actually so good that I wish I could say it were one of my lines.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Adel,

    Your friend is very fortunate to have you and I think that you give enough:)
    Love is all that matters and when that is what you are able to give, it is enough:)

    Love, Ingrid