You have written such a 'real' poem here Ingrid.
A poem that makes me feel like I am actually dancing on a floor somewhere, with this lady in my arms, as I read each word that you have written.
You have given this poem a life of its own, and placed me into a world of dreamy thoughts and wishes. Wonderful work Ingrid!
2 years ago
by Ben Pickard
Incredible! The flow of this piece is amazing - almost hectic. Obviously the brilliant structure adds heavily to that and the content itself is superb. Added to favourites.
All the best, Ingrid.