I Think I'm Going Insane

by Jad   Jun 12, 2011


Staring into a broken reflection
of tarnished imperfection,
marred with syringes and drugs
each pill breaks me down like a bug
reaching my limit till I collapse.

Therapy increases thoughts of suicide,
realizing your promises were lies.
Distortion rakes my mind into falling apart
already failing, I've lost my heart,
only so much pain can be endured.

I think I'm going insane
because dying here in shame
I have pushed away everyone I know,
and having nothing to show
I'm finally letting go.

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  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I can relate to this piece, spot on. I'm sorry you felt or may even still feel this way, cause its definitely something difficult to endure.

    As for the poem: It was very emotional; even though it was short it left an impression. It kinda made me think, like of all the things a person could write, something like this is going to be difficult to express well as well as in an "adult, put together" way. Believe me that is the hardest bit. The flow was amazingly smooth and easy to follow. The style was common and simple, but oh well it was still a great piece.

    I'll stop rambling now. Sorry to take your time.

    5/5

    MRK

  • 12 years ago

    by Liliana

    Sad Fellings make Big Poems, Amazing 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Jon914

    Your poem paints your current scenario very clearly. I hope you find the courage to let go of your attachments and find the happiness that has always dwelled inside you. Good luck

  • 12 years ago

    by Matt

    Very expressive, and emotional 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Angela

    I think this is a very good piece ^_^!!! I really like they emotion u put in to it.

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