Smokin' And Sippin' Whiskey

by Jessica   Oct 6, 2011


Got a quote tattoo on my back,
"Only God Can Judge Me."
A cross around my neck,
and a bad attitude.

God and me were sittin' there,
smokin', and sippin' whiskey.
He told me somethin',
somethin' that might change everything.

He whispered,
"Your not as strong as you think,"
Then he disapeared.
I was just sittin there, smokin and sippin' whiskey.

I never been a good girl,
always had somethin' to argue about.
got into trouble, everyday.
I never gave a damn.

Then I looked back on my life,
and realized something, something big.
"I need to change," I told myself.
Well I was sittin' there, smokin' and sippin' whiskey.

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  • 6 years ago

    by Ruby Red Memories

    This poem is probably the most heartfelt one that I have read by you I absoultly loved it

    5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by who i am is me

    Reminds me of bluebird by charles buwoski...nice and honest,different...i like

  • 6 years ago

    by Decayed

    This is definitely an amazing piece.
    It conveys so much faith.. and so much questions of 'us'. It reminds me of You Found Me - The Fray.

    I like a lot.

  • 6 years ago

    by L

    Awesome! Well written, I agree with the above comments and I like the fact that there is a good turning point " realizing that there must be a change". 5\5 :D

  • 6 years ago

    by Something Diabolical

    I really enjoyed reading this
    very down to earth!
    to me it flowed very nicely

    i can see this being a song

    overall a good write in my opinion. keep it up!

    5/5 from me
    (even if it was utter rubbish it would of got a 5/5 because i love "Smokin' And Sippin' whiskey" haha.. good thing its not though)