A Thousnad Times

by Jad   Oct 23, 2011


I regret the lies I've told you,
And now looking forward
I stumble and fall
only to recall
I've ended everything we had.

I cry in your rememberence
for I can't see your face
because that smile is dead,
laying in that eternal bed,
six feet underground.

Yet still your presence won't go,
haunting me tonight
as I erase this slate
overfilled with hate.
Still you won't let me go...

*I know this is not my best at all. I am just venting. :)

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  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    The second stanza presents that this person you are speaking about (or speaking to) is gone. I can definitely feel the sadness and regret for all the wrong things you've done to this person...
    This is very relatable to me right now.

    Thanks for sharing your vent. It's a great piece, and kinda eases my own pain :)
    5/5

    -X

  • 12 years ago

    by Kuro

    I may not be as good as commenting as you. but i wanted to let you know i read you poem, and i liked it very much. i thought it was simply wonderful.

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    I think you should always vent! :)

    Amazing piece.

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Aussy! Aussy....Aussy!

    I soooo missed your work, where were you, dude???
    this was so sad......austin...made me remember all regrets i have! seriously....the subject is over-used, some words are a bit of cliche, but...your flow and atmosphere made it special....

    thanks for the read !

    hope to read moooooreeeee from you soon! : D

  • 12 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Austin you may not think it is one of your best but as far as I am concerned it is. If you only knew how much these words struck at my heart when I read them, very fitting for a recent event in my life. The structure and flow is good. Well done.

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