His Caress, My Utopia.

So far,

I have only seen two pieces of poetry
that have make (at least to me)
something so how to say it,I don't wanna use sexual..something so.. soo sooo soo I don't know.

But, I mean...you know what I mean,
lets call it something so private can we?
with these two I mean "unknown destination" by temps, and now this one by you.

Talk about elegance,
how do you ladies do it? does this happen when you're over 18 -_-'?

because seriously I can't.

"for I ride his cosmos
to utopia"

you know whats funny,
that there is this movie by barbie.. that has to do with Utopia ( okay,I admit I watched it)
and in the movie the scenery is so damn magical, and beautiful..all these sparkles and stuff, I know you probably didn't write this poem based on that but ya know?.... ya know.

it took me there...

I don't really have much to say,
I just wanna give you props for taking a topic
many would fine you know..a little bit spicy..
and dip it in such elegance and grace.

you know how I always say your diction is what I love the most,
you always have some uncommon words going on,sometimes I have to look them up and when I do, I come back to re-read and I enjoy it even more.

so you're basically expanding my vocabulary.

also noticed you seem to have a fondness for "linger"....

but the way you bring it forward, its always perfect and different in every piece.

this I like, this I like, This I love.

you erotic superstar.

What for sexy ..... is this?!!

I'll edit this soon with a longer comment,
for now just know. I love this.

Bliss,
this is one of the most beautifully yet erotic poems I believe I've ever read.

You kept your words so classy, so intriguing I'd say that I dont know how your readers couldn't feel the love between these two people. Very creative comparisons, your ending was incredible!
Chels