Oh man I love the beginning! I wish it was that easy to find peace...but just lighting a candle. Peace can be found through a person's light as well, people can be our candles. We do have strength to overcome everything, it is just hidden from us sometimes.
"because your always at the end"
^The "your" here should be "you're"
This was a beautiful piece, dear, and I really enjoyed reading it! :)
Psht, wings are not clipped, not one bit. You ARE an angel, and I'm sure he agrees with me :)
This is absolutely gorgeous poetry. It hit me right in the heart, such a beautiful piece. I can tell this was therapeutic for you, and that usually makes for some intense, emotional poetry... and it did :) Beautiful!