Transparent Lips

by Lioness   Jul 4, 2012


I thought I would try something different and unique by exploring my creative side. You may notice a lot of errors in the wording but this has been done on purpose.

"Aoccdrnig to rscheearch at Cmabrigde Uinervtisy, it deosn't mttaer in waht oredr the ltteers in a wrod are, the olny iprmoetnt tihng is taht the frist and lsat ltteer be at the rghit pclae. The rset can be a toatl mses and you can sitll raed it wouthit a porbelm. Tihs is bcuseae the huamn mnid deos not raed ervey lteter by istlef, but the wrod as a wlohe"

I decided to write a poem based on this theory I had read online (which I believe is probably fake but still seems to work)

Thanks for taking the time to read it : )

Enjoy!

You may be albe to raed
tsehe wrods but tehy
dno't seem to cmoe out
as claer as tehy sohlud,

for my lfie no lngeor
mkses snsee to me
so ecah btreah stgrugles
to psas thsee frim lips,

ecxept wehn ksisnig
his.

Wehn our berahts fnilaly
tcouh I can feel msylef
splipnig itno him, and I
plead that eventually,

everything
will become clear again.

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  • 4 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Yes this was very creative, sweet and just brilliant!

  • 4 years ago

    by Jay

    I love the creativity!!! Great poem too! :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Britt

    Comments from judging:

    What a creative piece, I absolutely loved the guts this girl had behind writing this piece. I had no struggle at all while reading the poem and love that there was such a beautiful message behind it! The fact that things are cloudy and being with him makes everything clear is pretty unique, because typically it's the kiss that leaves us breathless and clouded. What a fun and unique write, I adore this!

  • 5 years ago

    by Marcus blake

    Thats illl ^___^

  • 5 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Ah, very creative indeed, I absultely love this. . its sooooo excelltnt so no wonder why it won :DD

    Nice work , well deserved win too :)

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