Feel

by Rachit Bhanage   Nov 22, 2012


Feel the breeze cold,melody chime
Overhaul shadows belong the rhyme_

Crystal skies in misc of faints,
cataclysmic numbness hold insane..

Eternal gleam of frost mourn soul
solemnly awaited,secrecy told !

    report violation
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  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Nice imagery. Despite being an old write, it still holds up well.

    Take care.

  • 9 years ago

    by Brenda

    Just lovely! So much imagery allowing some dreaming time-well done-

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    Though this piece is short it's full of imagery, perfect rhyming and emotion. It's written beautifully too.

    Em

  • 11 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    I really enjoyed reading this poem!

  • 12 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    Great piece! Well done..
    will surely read more frm u!

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