I love this, being a younger brother myself this sibling revenge was most satisfying. I couldnt figure out what was making it move if it wasn't you or your sister trying to get you in trouble and then "wham" sibling revenge, catnip for the win. Very well written, I got a really good and much needed laugh out of it :-)
3 years ago
This piece did very well in Andrea's contest and is continuing to make waves on poems and quotes. The story line itself is hilarious, the word choice is great, and the idea is so completely unique that it is wonderful in every way possible. Very well worth its place in Andrea's contest and now worth a week's worth of spotlight for it's stunning use of every skill in a poet's pallet. Absolutely love this piece.