I love this one, Ms. Lucero. Simple but really has an impact. Uniqueness and spontaneity are really portrayed here very well. I love the sense of independence in thus write. And to choose a rose to define you, that really holds a lot of symbolism. Great job (:
2 years ago
I really love this it makes perfect sense!!
It automatically draws a beautiful scenery, and then It directly connects itself to the poet (you).
Though they're few lines it said a lot.
The river for me was life, your life perhaps. It flows smoothly though the mountains or hardships are surrounding it. Even if it's difficult to cope with there are the lilies or your beloved onesmaking it easy to carry on. And as a result you grow beautifully as a rose in the poem to show your loved ones what you became :)
I just wanna nominate this if I could :/