See the Wind, My Love

by Larry Chamberlin   Feb 16, 2016


If you could see the wind
you would find my love
breezing in the currents
that surround you every moment

If you could hear the sunshine
you would skip to the strains
of heartfelt warmth abiding
throughout the days

If you could feel colors
your skin would be caressed
in wild mosaics by day
and soothed in orange at night

If you could sense my thoughts
you would know how much
I would give away for you
and you'd make me keep it safe
...
in your heart.

LMC 15 Feb 2016

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  • 8 years ago

    by Bob Shank

    That surround you every moment

    ^should this be "surround your every moment"

    thoroughly enjoyed this and one could feel the passion in your heart

    • 8 years ago

      by Larry Chamberlin

      Actually changed it From "your" to reaffirm the action of the wind.
      Thanks, Bob

  • 8 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Interesting.

  • 8 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Beautiful write.

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I like the tone of this write, there is warmth and there is truth. No fancy words or over the roof sort of thing but an honest tender and heartfelt write for the one you love.

    The smooth flow makes it an effortless read and what I like the most about it is that you have associated each aspect of nature to your love..nicely written.

  • 8 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Love the flow in this, Larry! Beautiful work. That idea of wanting to keep your love safe, and how much you mean to this person...

    Just beautiful!

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