You Lost Me

by Ren   Feb 24, 2017


Your words hurt.

My hearts
Not made
Of stone.

It’s breaking.

Piece
By
Piece
I
Fall.

I can’t help it.

I’m
Not
Super
Human.

I am fading.

Soft
Flesh
And
Bone.

You tear me down.

Fill
Me
With
Hate
And
Doubt.

I have fallen.

In
Your
Eyes
I
Fail.

I am broken.

Irreplaceably
Shattered
In
Your
Hands.

You look the other way.

And
I’m
Gone.

You lost me.

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  • 7 months ago

    by sammiej

    Great insight into those suppressed feeling.
    Love this piece x

    • 7 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you very much! :)

  • 7 months ago

    by pmmurphy

    The structure in this one rocks. The words fit nicely. I liked this very much :)

    • 7 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much!! :)

  • 9 months ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    This is brilliant. ...I can feel the hurt and the feelings of the writer. ..The layout is also well presented. .

    Well done Ren .

    Gel

    • 9 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much, Gel! :)

  • 9 months ago

    by Em

    I think we have all been here or is it just me a million times over lol.. I love the set up of this and most definitely the words.

    • 9 months ago

      by Ren

      Oh yes, Em, I believe many of us have been here...me many times as well. Thank you so much for reading and commenting! :)

  • 9 months ago

    by Michael

    Expresding through poetry, really shows where we all are at times. Nice peice of writing

    Mike

    • 9 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much! :)

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