An absolutely incredible piece. I love the language in this, the sense of all-encompassing sorrow. It was beautifully poetic, and profoundly wise. It was a real treat to read. Had an essence of Bob Dylan and John Lennon, actually. It had the atmosphere of a well known poem written decades ago.
I think, if this is the quality of work you will continue to produce, then we - the readers of your work - will be exceedingly lucky.