Nindiya Re

O this is so beautiful Liz. Your poetry makes me proud as a friend.

Miss Mel
So nice to see you writing again, have you been on a journey? :)
This is a beautiful piece
Much love
Michael x

You surprised me with your usage of Urdu words here..!! I am an ardent lover of Urdu poetry..
Wonderfully penned Mel, well done.

Oh my word...
Firstly I'd like to say its good to see you back and secondly I'd like to say I'm glad this piece had been nominated I can imagine many of us have been there, done that and got the t-shirt to prove it so to speak maybe even a few so what I guess I'm saying is this piece is no doubt relatable and meaningful to the best of us and if not now it most certainly will be in years to come unfortunately.
I did try and find a meaning for the title but all I could come up with for a meaning of 'Nindiya' was 'blameless' which I guess could fit perfectly really as sometimes when 'love' breaks down it can be blameless and just fizzle out anyway I'm not sure that's the meaning here...
The piece itself just flows so very well and if I dare say it it flows as smooth as glass - yes I did steal that from our dear friend Mr picked I hope it isn't copyrighted or I owe him some money hahaha
Take care and don't be a stranger. Xx

Very heartfelt Mel, Nominated!