by Larry Chamberlin          Jul 13, 2017
    
        category :
            Sadness, depression /
            lost relationships
            
    
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by Ren
| Fantastic write!! | 
| Loved this thought provoking piece particularly the last stanza which I thought was an amazing emotionally visual treat | 
 
    by Em
| A very thought provoking piece as always Larry which is very deep and raw in my humble opinion | 
by mossgirl19
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            A write I can totally relate so much at this point of my life.  | 
by pmmurphy
| I can dig the darkness in this one. Its a bit sobering. Good job on this much enjoyed |