Moonlight Drawn by Clouds

by mossgirl19   Aug 14, 2017


We patiently sit in our skies
Oceans apart
In the same world.

Astronomers concluded
The moon revolves
Around the earth
But I could only care
About why is the night
Separated from day
As I am from you.

I live by the moonlight
Engraved in your soul
And everytime
The sun shines
On my horizon...

By love's command
The clouds by themselves
Draw the moon.

In that way
You and me
Will stare
At the same moon
In the sky.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    JUDGING COMMENT:
    Moonlight Drawn by Clouds by mossgirl19 points: 10
    Mel (like most people here) has a very unique style and this piece is no different and is in my opinion by far one of her best pieces I've read. It distinctively speaks of the patience we need when dealing with a long distance relationship and the questioning of why in some instances their day is our night and vice versa but it shows there's no greater love than the one Mel speaks of and to her it's one of real love which shows throughout the piece. A beautiful image is brought out through her words, bravo.

  • 8 years ago

    by Matt Carroll

    Wonderfully written.

  • 8 years ago

    by Lucifer

    Congratulations Mel..

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Lady Mel, congratulations on your front page write! It really is a lovely poem. Hugs-

    • 8 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      Hugs too Queen Brenda and thank you.

  • 8 years ago

    by Jied

    Nice one mel..

    • 8 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      Hey, thank you, Jied. Great to hear from you!

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