Ice Fantasy

by mossgirl19   Aug 17, 2017


Draped in icy chill
We kissed with shivering lips
Love poured
Through the snow
And we watched
As fireworks of flakes
Melted the frozen winter sky.

Two souls came as one
And the warmth that emanated
Seduced the wintry clouds
to condensate.

As droplets of water
Started to fall
We lazed around
Allowing our love story
To be etched in the ice.

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  • 3 months ago

    by Augustus Black

    Aaahh! ssh... How sweet is that!

    Well, this write looks very realistic.
    I mean one must have gone deep in the loving zone, felt every scene while reading this wonderful flow. The warmth of true love can pass through every danger, I agree with you.

    So, seems like you are looking forward to destroy the whole ice castle with the warmth of your magical lips.

    A good touching write - Ice girl.

  • 3 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Mel - there isnt anything i can say that others havent.. How beautifully written this is.. well done.

  • 3 months ago

    by Lucifer

    Seriously, how you do it?
    And especially with the love ones?
    Sometimes, I think you have a magical pen.
    This poem is like a spell. I just hope anyone nominated it.

    • 3 months ago

      by mossgirl19

      Yay! Thank you very much, V@n.

  • 3 months ago

    by Em

    Lady Mel, this is a little gem and it flows so well. Everything about it is perfect and I've read it many times and found it much more beautiful than the time before.

    The title linked nicely to the content which was most certainly majestic.

    1/ The first line makes me believe that both parties are either very cold or have had a bad time with love in the past therefore they're 'draped icy chill' but then I read on and believe it's just that they are outside in winter and it's freezing and they kiss as snow begins to fall which is a lovely image.

    2/ I absolutely love this part, it oozes with wonderful imagery and I imagine sparks flying as they kissed and the love they have shining out of them.

    3/ I love the ending here again it's beautiful and I think the very last line says that their love is 'set in the stone' which in turn means it'll last forever - perfect.

    Em x

    • 3 months ago

      by mossgirl19

      This comment is just perfect, Em. Thank you, Duchess.

  • 3 months ago

    by Michael

    Miss M you are writing some lovely pieces on love and romance. I especially enjoyed reading this one.
    Well done
    Michael x:)

    • 3 months ago

      by mossgirl19

      I have been dreaming lately...hehe. Thanks, Michael.

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