Drug Lord's and Pimps

JUDGING COMMENT:
Drug Lord's and Pimps by Maple Tree points: 10
Andrea always writes with such rawness that resonates with many of us here but with such beauty that many of us wish we could write with such power because it's very touching in it's profoundness. It speaks of the lengths a mother would and should go for her child and the woes they feel when their child has taken a wrong path in the winding road of life which in itself must have been hard to write but Andreas strength prevails and in my opinion that makes for a much better and smoother write and read even if it's a literal and raw write - I applaud you on your bravery for writing such a powerful piece and allowing us to read it too. Now where's the tissues?

Judges comments

Drug lord's and Pimps" By Maple Tree 7 points

I was totally blown away by this piece by Maple Tree, such raw emotion, and power so eloquently expressed.

One should never underestimate the love of a parent and the lengths they will go to go order to protect those they care for.

Simply wonderful writing (7)

Andrea I had to hold back a little on my comments with regard to this one.

I know you understand.

Craig xx

A mother's pain and anguish will never go unanswered and
I will pray that your little bird will break through the darkness
and return back to her sunshine...((hugs)) take care Andrea

Congrats on the win

I can't believe I forgot to comment on this powerful write, Ms. Andi. Congrats on your win, a very strong write.

This breaks my heart, bring her home Sunshine, bring her home, she needs her Momma :'(