It's coming to an end

by Dagmar Wilson   Oct 1, 2017


Trees are shedding
lifeless leaves,
their breath has expired.

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  • 2 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    An excellent piece that captures the end of Summer well. Milly x

  • 2 months ago

    by S s...

    Amazing one from you.

  • 2 months ago

    by Brenda

    Dagmar, so very true. There is something about fall that's both calming sad at the same time-

  • 2 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    It certainly has, Dagmar. Autumn is well and truly coming here and you have captured the end of summer expertly.

    Take care and all the best as ever,

    Ben

  • 2 months ago

    by Michael

    Dagmar,

    As Mark says much more to this poem about the bigger picture.. is this true? I'm intrigued, as I read this for what it is about Winter is now showing its true colours.
    A wonderful little piece from you, and yes thought provoking
    Well done lady
    Much love
    Michael :)

    • 2 months ago

      by Mark

      I tend to interpret things to extreme and often incorrectly. Lol. Kind of 'a glass half empty and about to shatter' kind of guy.

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