A storm has brewed (Rondeau)

by Michael   Jun 11, 2018


... it rained today, and yesterday
my bluey sky, growls black and grey.
The rock I built with sweat and scrim
erodes with haste from outside in
..and all inside has washed away

The eyeing storm comes more to slay
and leaves me slumped upon the clay.
A textured place, somewhat akin
....it rained today..

..like yesterday, it rained all day
Its hard to keep the storm at bay.
So while my soul is damp within
I’ll brace the weathers darkly spin
and hope to feel a sunshine ray
......it rained today

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  • 1 month ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    Wow! The flow is perfect! Just beautiful!

    --- MKKK

    • 1 month ago

      by Michael

      Thank you MKKK :)

  • 1 month ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    Wow! The flow is perfect! Just beautiful!

    --- MKKK

  • 1 month ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Glad to see this nominated. I am speechless. Hugs to you

    • 1 month ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Dagmar :)x

  • 1 month ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Michael this is brilliant. So dark and moody, each word suits the theme perfectly and the Rondeau has been perfectly executed. Bravo! :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 1 month ago

    by Fenrir

    "So while my soul is damp within."
    This line was beautiful, this whole poem was beautiful.
    Amazing write, definetly adding to my favourites without hesitation.

    • 1 month ago

      by Michael

      thank you Fenrir, lovely comments :)

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