Petrichor

by P o e m e l o   Sep 16, 2018


Our misunderstandings rapidly evaporate
pressured by quarrels
condense to cloudy conciliation

- Imminent precipitation.

~

Though our rainbow no longer appear
Your scent lingers after the rain

I still love you...

    report violation
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  • 5 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I, too, have a poem titled Petrichor! Great minds think alike! The scent of the earth after it rains... inspiration at its finest.
    I love your usage of the different stages of the water cycle to describe a relationship. Love has those stages... and unfortunately sometimes the heartache is what lingers.
    Overall, very nice poem.

    • 5 years ago

      by P o e m e l o

      Appreciate your comment Hannah :)
      Megan Chapman has also a poem with the same title as us.
      Will peek at your piece too :)

  • 5 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    This is something quite beautiful.

    Craig

    • 5 years ago

      by P o e m e l o

      Thank you Craig, your works never fail to amaze me even

  • 5 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Though our rainbow no longer appear
    Your scent lingers after the rain

    I still love you...

    I wish....
    Touched me really deep. Glad to see it's nominated.

  • 5 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    A short yet very thought provoking piece which states no matter what this person has put you through you still love them but that's. Because you can't turn love off just like a switch, if only, eh?

    • 5 years ago

      by P o e m e l o

      Thats right Em, love has to be taken seriously. Given the fact that we go through some misunderstandings, its not the reason to cut off the tie :)

  • 5 years ago

    by P o e m e l o

    Glad that my favorite authors are here :)

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