Fooled by my laugh?

by Just That Girl   Jan 6, 2005


Am I your past?
At long last?
Don’t you think?
The year went by like eye blink
Did I become a memory?
A blind story
Did I walk out your heart
Did that set us apart?
Don’t you see the pain?
Look in to my eyes again
Look deep inside
Can\'t you notice that 10 minutes ago I\'ve cried?
Even if I laugh
You don’t know the second half….
The second half of the story
The second half of me

*please comment and vote!! I BEG YA!!

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  • 12 years ago

    by Sammi

    really good poem, really enjoyed it !!

  • 12 years ago

    by Christina Gomes

    tht was a great poem, srry abtt the other comment, it was just tht all ur stanzas had quotes i've seem be4, i didn't mean to offend you....but this poem is good, and its just tht u comment on so many of my poems so i went to read one of yours and thts the one i happened to see...im srry....=( i hope you're not madd or anything...if you want keep reading my poetry...

    Christina

  • 12 years ago

    by Victoria

    This poem is very true I can totally relate good rhyming as well!

    take care

  • 12 years ago

    by Mandi

    Good poem its very true i feel like that alot great job keep it up*luvs*

  • 12 years ago

    by Hayley

    wow. awesome, its good. dont ever stop writing...-hayley-