You Make Me Cut

by A Broken Bleeding Soul   Mar 14, 2005


Run away from all the pain
I'll run to you and pretend I'm sane
Save me from spilling this precious blood
Save me from spilling and making it flood
I want to stop but I don't know how
I need you here with me right now
To keep myself from using this blade
Cutting myself, beginning to fade
I fall down into my hole so dark
I try to escape but it leaves a mark
I call your name but you don't seem to hear
You're so out of reach even though you're so near
I promised to stop many times before
As hard as I try I go back for some more
My promise to you I cannot keep
For these cuts in my arm left a scar so deep
I have nothing better to do...
So now I'll sit and think of you
While I push the blade right through

*I hope everyone likes it... please vote and comment. It will be greatly appreciated*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gizmo

    ^ complelt agree

  • 18 years ago

    by dancer

    Holy shit i just read every single one of ur poems HAHA it took me a few hours coz im quite a slow reader but i finally got there...........i was only going to read 1 but once a read 1 i had to read them all..............I THINK U ARE AN AWESOME POET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 i liked every 1 of them.....u have such strong feelings and u can see it coming through in ur poems......wat u have gone through in ur life is some tough shit.....it seems so unfair that some ppl have great lives and then theres others that aint all that are crap....my father used to abuse my mum but i had my two big sisters there to protect me (i was only about 4) so that was tough he used to punch holes in the walls and it was hard to tell my mates y the holes were there if they came over....but wen he moved out it was so much better........i dnt talk to him much ne more to me i dnt really consider me having a dad.......well neways got to go im going out be strong hang in there judt think wen ur old enough u can move out and go live a great life

    xoxoxoxoxo
    allana

  • 18 years ago

    by Jennifer

    I can relate a lot to this poem and I like it a lot...I've lost a lot of friends and I have been "disowned" by family members because of it.