Me Vs. The Razor Blade

by Emilia   Apr 29, 2005


I cut the razor blade into my wrists
Because I don't want to feel like this
The pain and the anger you've given me
The words you've said hurt me can't you see
The razor blade will save me
I'll be alright you'll see

I feel down from my feet's
And my heart skips a beat
It's so much blood on the floor
You screamed when you walked through the door
When you saw me laying there
Your eyes where filled with fear
In a minute I'm out of here
I looked at your eyes and I saw a tear

Now my pulse is getting weak
I don’t even have the strength to speak
You said “the ambulance will be here soon”
Hold my hand my beautiful “Mary Moon”
You called me that after your favorite song
I hear my heart beat I’ll soon be gone
I promise It won’t be long

Now I can see the white light
The light that shines so bright
Darling I think I’m dead
My life is hanging on a thin thread
The razor blade is my new friend
Thats why I cut myself again

But I will be alright in heaven
I will meet you at heavens Seven Eleven
Hope I will see you soon
Good bye from your “Mary Moon”

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  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Wow that was sad I think it brought a tear to my eye. Very touching poem! Another good poem from you! Take Care! Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by Leah20

    This poem felt very cliche to me and contained no rhyme of which I haven't heard a thousand times before. Push yourself to break from the norm of teenage angst poetry and focus on the world around you, from the trees to thunderstorms to the people you see. If you're driving in the car and see some peculiar person, think of a story behind their life, put it into poetry and continue to grow. Still write poems such as this to let out pent up emotion, but also broaden your horizons. Keep writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    hmm..not your best a few words didnt fit like "anyway my life...." just cut out the anyway and its great. then a few words are spelt wrong, to the point where im not sure what you mean. if you fixed that it would be a good poem. 4/5. altnough the title doesnt really match. its more of Me and My Razor Blade. Me vs. The Razor Blade suggests and interesting fight:P instead the reader gets and interesting demise. still good, but the title could help it more.
    ~Freak~

  • 18 years ago

    by rachel

    hey this was soo full of emotion and reli powerful. well dun it was xcellent xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    :'( ... i dont own words...

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