oh my god beautiful, you can tell its written from the heart i think some of the best poems come from being upset and feeling like there is no way out, you open up and feelings come flooding out, in my opinion its healing for the heart,
Wow, the fact that I just read this and a similar story I heard from a woman yesterday is a lil coincidence. Love truly can conquer all and I believe all can be forgiven....you're a strong person to understand that. Not many do, you see?
I loved the poem, the rhymes were a little simple, but that's okay...the concept was amazing. keep in touch!
13 years ago
great poem! i love it! such beauty and even flow! i can feel the emotions coming to the surface of the page! true love and sorrow and forgiveness! keep it up!
Well, honestly I thought the subject was great. However the way it was executed I didn't care so much for. Maybe its the couplets, but to me something doesn't seem right. Still, its pretty good, but not quite up to par with your other works. I'm not trying to be mean, just giving my honest opinion.