Comments : Incomplete Without You

  • 12 years ago

    by Jay27

    well what to say? sometimes it takes even more strength to stay and fight to save something you have than it does to walk away...for this you have my respect.

    From a poetry point of view its probably your best poem also, well, in my humble opinion.

  • 12 years ago

    by lindsey

    omg that was straight from the heart..Great poem..I didnt't like it I loved it..It was just so how do i say this it was just a real ass poem..So true..great write..<3 lindsey

  • 12 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Beautiful job, written truly from the heart. Well written, truly a pleasure to read. hugs, love, *Ann*

  • 12 years ago

    by lorna westwick

    oh my god beautiful, you can tell its written from the heart i think some of the best poems come from being upset and feeling like there is no way out, you open up and feelings come flooding out, in my opinion its healing for the heart,

  • 12 years ago

    by Miss Krueger

    Very sensetive poem. Forgivness is surely made of God. Love to red more from you.

    Deep thoughts- Miss Krueger.

  • 12 years ago

    by Brad Champagne

    The imagery of the tearing angels' wings is great. There have been times that I have felt like I was just falling, with no wing to soar. Very touching poem. Keep it up.

    Brad
    Champagne

  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    another masterpiece i love it

  • 12 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Wow, the fact that I just read this and a similar story I heard from a woman yesterday is a lil coincidence. Love truly can conquer all and I believe all can be forgiven....you're a strong person to understand that. Not many do, you see?

    I loved the poem, the rhymes were a little simple, but that's okay...the concept was amazing. keep in touch!

    Love, Heather
    ps 5

  • 12 years ago

    by Taylor

    great poem! i love it! such beauty and even flow! i can feel the emotions coming to the surface of the page! true love and sorrow and forgiveness! keep it up!

    Love, Taylor

  • 12 years ago

    by Seductive

    thats hot!!, ur flow get me every time, keep em comin n ima keep readin, nice job!!5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Jeff

    One amazing poem about love that I have just read.You have an amazing talent.I give you 5.Thanks for your comments on mines.Jeff

  • Well, honestly I thought the subject was great. However the way it was executed I didn't care so much for. Maybe its the couplets, but to me something doesn't seem right. Still, its pretty good, but not quite up to par with your other works. I'm not trying to be mean, just giving my honest opinion.

  • 12 years ago

    by Just Val

    Oh wow, I liked this poem alot I especially liked this part:

    Falling without my wings into evening glory.
    Never to feel the air of a fairytale story.

    Then I saw the future in my dreams last night.
    A message not to give up this fight.

    I'm telling you this from my heart.
    I hate the thought of us forever apart.

    I will always love you, think of you everyday.
    Looking into your eyes, you take my breath away.

    Maybe I should carry on without you.
    But I just cannot find the way to.

    you are a really good writer keep it up loved it. 5. Luv the ultimately always ♥ЀâĎ Ģίя└♥ a-k-a Val

  • 12 years ago

    by Andrea

    *speechless*

    this poem...your writing...wow. i love it. amazing work hayley, enough said.

    5.5

    love and hugs

  • 12 years ago

    by Mark Elderman

    Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

  • 11 years ago

    by JAYMA SUMMERS

    I feel the same way please take a look at some of my poems!!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    This was very sweet adn highly emotional, however somehtinga bout teh second verse didn't flow right?? i don't know, it was still amazing with each and every syllable. fantastic!
    -Suzie

  • 10 years ago

    by Cassandra Wojick

    I really liked this, great job. youre truly talented.