Revealing the obscured

by AlexJ   Dec 12, 2005


Fright strikes so suddenly
filling up your mind
You are now in custody
That's what life designed

Scared to keep on going
afraid of the unkown
petrified to know the truth
shocked of what is shown

Trying to adjust your thoughts
to this new revelation
You're challenging the desert droughts
of existance own creation

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  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    Excellent...very deep and kinda scary but totally awasome!! love it 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    The flow is wonderful and the 2nd stanza totally reflects how I feel. Love ur work

    Juls

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey that was a good, interesting poem! nicely flows and very understandable! It's short but i still loved it! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Another great one.
    Most of your poems are short though, I feel that there could be a lot more added on to it! But hey, if short poems are your thing, I'll let it be, lol.

    Tiffany.xox.

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Great meaning and nice rhymes. You could make it longer

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