Normal Kid

by glass*wall*prison   Mar 31, 2006


I'm just a normal kid,
with a bleak out look on life.
Everything i've ever done,
has caused others pain or stife.

I'm just a normal kid.
I know whats right from wrong.
I'll do what ever i want,
and ill do it for however long.

I'm just a norml kid,
i so hate consequences.
I'm sure what ever i do
will most certainly cause offences.

I'm just a normal kid
with a great American Dream,
and a less than mediocore chance
that I'll ever amount to anything.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    Another good poem but i feel it could be improved, the flow is not so good as your other poems.

  • 18 years ago

    by x0xmissnLogiix0x

    GREAT JOB!!! that's a true and very touching poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Woah, awesome poem. Very well written, nice flow. Great rhythm as well. I really liked the lines:

    "I'm just a normal kid.
    I know whats right from wrong.
    I'll do what ever i want,
    and ill do it for however long."

    Ahmen to that. lol! Nicely done, keep up the awesome work! 5/5
    ~Luvz~
    ~Angie~
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by pseudo

    Cool poem I like how it gives teenagers a good reputaion when society looks at teenagers as something bad.. great work keep it up ;)

    --emotionless.19*

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Great poem with great meanings!!
    keep it up xxxxx

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