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by Juls Apr 21, 2006
Sadness, depression /
With a rain storm of bricks
My body all cut and soaked red
Healing the wounds
I was too weak so I just weep
You wanted to try again
I looked and laughed
Looked at the mirror with shame
I let my chance go of us
Too weak to last a week
I killed myself for our love*Ironicy said...True Love.
by Tainted Beauty
Aw that was so sad! I liked the way you wrote it though, it was very interesting to read, and even though it didn't rhyme it flowed really well, great work!
P.s. In the title, it should be "then" instead of "than"
Oh one more thing.. "Came Th(e)n Left"
It's not "Than".. I just realized it.
Hmm, another poem about cutting. Original? I think not. Umm, if you want to write about a topic that is constantly discussed, at least try to be more creative? Try to look at it from a different point of view. That's my suggestion.
by Samantha Hollywood
Juls, wow. Was this kind of based on a non-fiction event?? If it wasn`t you sure made it sound convincing.
Wow this poem was fantastic...very unique style of writing... but i must say i totally loved it...keep up the good work...im sure to continue readin ur poetry.