Do you remember some time ago?
I asked if you were perfect but you said no
Did you ever think that:
In my dreams you're the sweetest thing
In my life you are everything
Still you say you're not
So I ask, why is it so hard to let go?
Everyone thinks I'm strong
But tears were falling from my eyes
On the day you left us and said goodbye
Now I know my feelings I should no longer hide
I love you and I want you to stay by my side
Longing to hold you in my arms so tight that I'll never let go
Wishing to be with you forever, I hope now you know
That when I'm around you, it just feels like heaven
You're my angel and your heart is my safe haven
To live a life that's so incomplete
To live a life with nothing dear to keep
Is that how you want me to be?
You know without you I'm so weak
Because you're the only strength that I seek
So please... don't go, I'm being so bold
Just by saying i need your hand to hold
Don't leave me like this
so broken,so torn, so cold
So as I write this
You're somewhere so far away
A place i can only reach
By loving you this way
Wow, that was so beauiful and by far my favorite of all, I love how you poured out all your heart into this poem and how they were so strong, powerful, and meaningful, that they screamed out to my as I read each word, screamed how your feelings, and your soul, OUTSTANDING POEM, WONDERFUL JOB
So sweet and beautiful...
You write very touching love poetry, realistic and filled with emotions and this piece is not an exception.
Truly great, from the beginning to the end.
I like your rhymes here a lot, you created excellent flow with them.