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by TinyDancer46 Sep 6, 2006
Sadness, depression /
Haunting every feeling
Leaving cracks upon my heart
A tremor taking over me
And tearing me apart
The nightmare as I'm dreaming
Killing me each time I wake
A cut that bleeds a little more
With every breath I take
Like chains inside my prison
Or a noose upon my rope
Shredding every wish I've had
By tearing out my hope
The tears behind my smile
And the truth as I pretend
It's pain that I've kept hidden...
It's the death of my best friend
This is so sad. Brought a tear to my eye. Xx
by Brooke Howard
You are amazing!!
I look up to you...neverrrrrr stop writing poems because you are fantastic!
by Hopelessly Devoted to You
Hey, awesome poem even tho its sad. I'm very sorry if this is true but ur very talented and u have a wonderful way in expressing ur emotions. This rates like 10 out of 5, excellent work
Aww really sad but really good
I ALWAYS loved your writing! Girl you got talent...it seems so effortless!! Envy will kill many admirers! You should proud of your abilities my dear!!!
This piece...a REAL thing that many of live through. Something MANY can relate to. The key I believe is to be able to write something that will touch people and you have that!
AWESOME!!!!! Hope to read something a little newer soon! ;)