Gosh, this was excellent, i loved it, it told me of a story, and i got to thinking i am a little harsh sometimes. i hurt the one i love. and now i'm trying to get her back. but this stirred emotions in me. well done.
Another amazing peice! i especially loved the lines :
"I guess in a way I just still can't believe
That you would love someone as messed up as me"
i think a lot of people can relate to that!
really lovely poem! truly wonderful.
I understand what you mean when you say you hurt yourself by hurting him. Im an arguement we don't think before we just yell things out, and sometimes i think we're actually trying to hurt there feelings in a way. We know everything about the person good and bad and it makes it that much easier to upset them with our words. Fantastic poem as always, amazing flow and word choice, 5/5 GG23