I really enjoyed this...very moving and intense, flow was good for the most part but there were times when I thought it was a little off.
Again, I loved the ending, it hits the reader hard.
I thought this was beautifully written, it really tugs on ther reader's heart.
The rythm scheme was off abit but the message was right in your face. I liked how you boldly expressed your distain for the other person it was well writen in that manner. All and all it was good I would have rythmed it abit more to keep the flow going but it was a good read. ok this is the 5th poem and now I will e-mail you with my over view hope you can take it. Plot121