I Will Give You Independence Forever

Spread throughtou the world America\'s light
`throughout

i sallute you
`salute

Anyhow, as I've said before : You write such poetry in a way that makes others want to read even if they do not think of these topics often . Your words are simple; your poetry short -- but your pieces hold such hope that fill people with warmth . Especially those connected somehow the Iraq war .

The ending was superb, and beautifully chosen .
Another great one from you (:
..__MiNDYY

That to me was your al time best David, I have an uncle in Iraq, so it touched my heart. Thank you!

your servent also,
-Liz-

This poem was portrayed very well i liked this because it was so true. nicely written poem you have here david. Well done ~mel

Nice work this sounds great and my brother loved it said it was true

Doing something with good intentions leads to good endings.
thanks for sharing this!
Marjan