I Will Give You Independence Forever

by Independence Forever   Jan 5, 2007


I am a patriot through and through
i stand for God, my principles true

my country i fight for today
that my children can feel no dismay

i hold my weapon ready to fire
for my people at home whose needs be dire

fight ye patriot fight
spread throughtou the world America\\\'s light

from revolutionary to civil wars
all the way to vietnam\\\'s war

ease iraq\\\'s suffering
the enemy is now beffeting

U.S. armed forces
1775-2007

i sallute you

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  • 10 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Spread throughtou the world America\'s light
    `throughout

    i sallute you
    `salute

    Anyhow, as I've said before : You write such poetry in a way that makes others want to read even if they do not think of these topics often . Your words are simple; your poetry short -- but your pieces hold such hope that fill people with warmth . Especially those connected somehow the Iraq war .

    The ending was superb, and beautifully chosen .
    Another great one from you (:
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 10 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    That to me was your al time best David, I have an uncle in Iraq, so it touched my heart. Thank you!

    your servent also,
    -Liz-

  • 10 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This poem was portrayed very well i liked this because it was so true. nicely written poem you have here david. Well done ~mel

  • 10 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Nice work this sounds great and my brother loved it said it was true

  • 10 years ago

    by Marjan

    Doing something with good intentions leads to good endings.
    thanks for sharing this!
    Marjan