Closed Doors

by X2892   Feb 27, 2007


I'm all alone;
in the darkness on my own.
Can't take the pain no more;
this god dam war
inside me is to much
to handle, can a creature such
as me survive out there in the light?

All I can do is go deeper
into the darkness, the deeper
I go the more I see the reaper
that wants to take me away.

Murder, sacrifice, torture
It's what Imma do to you.
But when it comes to me,
its something I go threw
everyday, and now its your turn.

I hate you!
I hate all of those that threw
me here and left me here in the darkness.
I will avenge
myself by getting revenge
on all those people that cause me harm!

What are you waiting for
don't you see your death is near,
Scream fools! let me hear
your pain that I cause;
wait let me pause
for a second to let you run
so I can hunt you down with my gun.
Imma make you a deal
and kill you for real
this time!

Murder, sacrifice, torture
It's what Imma do to you.
But when it comes to me,
its something I go threw
everyday, and now its your turn.

Human...... Creature ...nope
I'm far worse, I've become
a killing machine
that lust's for blood.
Many victims will flood
in my way for revenge;
so until I avenge
myself, more blood will be poured.

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  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    The emotion is conveyed beautifully through this well written peice and lol..there is so much of anger in it...the choice of words was superb and it flowed well except in some places...anyway i can't give u any less than 5...it's brilliantly penned...so i voted a 5/5 for it..=)
    GOOD JOB!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by xFadedxForeverx

    Wow, thats good.
    shows good format.
    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany Hampson

    Hey that poem is really good....sad but good

  • That was really good... You can comment on any 3 of mine

  • 17 years ago

    by amber

    That was amazing. keep it up. i can totally relate to this. great job but there are some spelling mistakes but otherwise keep writing.